I really like how Stefano gave Dr. Kraushaar a thick, muscular body, which can be seen in panels one and two. It also was a great idea for Stefano to have the Vampire hanging upside down in the park and to give the Vampire large batwings.
In comics, the artist is so important to telling the story, probably more than people realize. The writer will usually lay out a general plot to the artist, like I did for Stefano, but so much story detail usually comes from numerous art decisions that tell the story as much or more than the writer does with words. In comics, the story is a true equal collaboration between penciler and writer!
When Stefano and I worked on issue #1 together (as well as issues #2 and #3 that we are currently creating), it is truly a comic book that is co-created, co-written….co-labored! Stefano is the best artist and storyteller for Monsters Among Us that I could ever have hoped for….and a truly terrific friend also!
With this page, I named the park “ROMITA PARK” after John Romita, who is one of my favorite comic book artists! I also had fun writing the dialog with the vampire thinking, “She will next feel the PANG of Count Drakkard’s FANGS!” ………So, even vampires can rhyme!
When I decided to set the storyline in the late 1950′s, I knew I wanted to have the Kraushaar family utilize jet packs! There was so much scientific optimism in the 1950′s, in pop culture anyway, hoping that society would one day use jet packs or flying cars to travel! I really love the coloring by Mark in panel 4 at night in the park!
I ran into The Flash and Ms. Marvel at the Eckman’s Comic, Card & Toy Show……..excellent costumes! http://www.eckmanstoyshow.com/
Here I am at the Eckman’s Comic, Card and Toy Show in New Braunfels, Texas on August 24, 2013! http://www.eckmanstoyshow.com/
I spent the day meeting con attendees, showing them the portfolio size art from Monsters Among Us #1 and selling Monsters Among Us t-shirts! Since issue #1 of the comic book is currently sold out, I look forward to doing a Kickstarter campain to reprint issue #1!
I enjoyed inking Stefano’s wonderful buildings in Panel 1 only to write extensive dialogue that covered them up! This is a difficulty in writing a comic book……..deciding how much to write and how much beautiful art is to be covered over. I love how Stefano created this elaborate maching to sharpen the wooden stakes….such imagination! And finally, the determined look of Dr. Kraushaar in the last panel is sensational!
It was fun to ink the last panel with Dr. Kraushaar and his wife….who looks very beautiful here, I think! Stefano penciled Dr. Kraushaar with a very determined look on his face……..ready to hunt a Vampire!
I very much enjoyed writing the dialogue for the first two panels, taking into account the hysteria over comic books in the mid-1950′s which led to congressional hearings and the subsequent Comics Code stamp! Stefano’s penciling on the crowd scene and the floating heads is terrific and very reminiscent of the 50′s/60′s comics! As always, Mark’s coloring is first rate with the old school colors!
Wonderful Page 19 pencils by Stefano! I love this progression of the Vampire seeking out and attacking the man on the street, complete with the dead hand protruding upward! A few changes that I made to the page were showing the fangs of the Vampire in panel 3 and displaying the Vampire landing under a street lamp in panel 2. It was very cool how Stefano shows the Vampire leaving the killing in giant bat form!
I love panels with lots of black backgrounds and depth. Panel 3 was alot of fun to ink with the Vampire attacking the victim! Panel 4 was also enjoyable rendering the dark night sky! I chuckled to myself when I thought of the phrase in panel 1 “Who, returning home from a long day’s work….Is looking forward to a cold beer and a warm bed!” Too bad, this man never tasted that cold beer!